All Comments on 'Possession'

has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout which can be found in the Bulletin Boards.

Hi ya W_F love your story and cant wait for the next installment. Add me to your mailing list :P :D

One of my favorite ladies is not one of my favorite authors. What a great job you did, I can not wait to read more of your stories.

Thump

but the editing leaves something to be desired. It's a very hot story, but it needs a good going over with a fine-toothed comb to really make it shine the way the passion it contains so richly deserves.

Very hot, very erotic. Grab a proofreader or editor to make some gentle pointers on the next go-round and it will definitely climb to the top list in no time flat.

FallingToFly

Ohh Witchy! That was hard, hot and horny as all hell - I could feel it as it was happening.....well done on your first submission!

Loved the story, Witch Fire. It was so hot! Can't wait to hear more.

Such a hot first story ... please write more

this reader will be looking forward to witch_fire's next submission.

Gil