All Comments on 'Possessions Ch. 04'

Is going to fall in love with Trivalm. Or maybe that is wishful thinking

Loved it. I love the dfferent dimensions and really cannot wait for some more of the story line to move a little. Right now Although interesting I think the other aim of the story beyond their capture and acceptance isn't being explored enough. Good read.though. Well written and just interesting set of characters.

For some reason the idea that she may be using potions to control the slaves behavior really bugs me. I want to see the struggle not some doped up happy daze. Obedience and loyalty gained thru drugs isn't real or properly earned. Hope that you move away from that.

I hope Sarantha ass gets gutted like a fish soon. As well, as Ivory.For some odd reason I don't like the Ivory is acting.All meek,and stupid like a damn dog.

Anyways, keep it coming

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