by readwrite
Really enjoyed this.
For me the highlight was the highly evocative description of the airmotor system, I really saw that thing bowling along the rural roads going "poketapocketapocketa". The concise manner of that was brilliant.
Personally I hope to read more and in particular of Bill's back story, which could be far more interesting than the sex (IMO).
As a certain very well known actor and commentator would say, "Oh MMMYYYYYYYY!"
applause, applause, applause