All Comments on 'Postal Bill'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Really enjoyed this.

For me the highlight was the highly evocative description of the airmotor system, I really saw that thing bowling along the rural roads going "poketapocketapocketa". The concise manner of that was brilliant.

Personally I hope to read more and in particular of Bill's back story, which could be far more interesting than the sex (IMO).

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Short and sweet!

lAnatomistelAnatomiste5 months ago

As a certain very well known actor and commentator would say, "Oh MMMYYYYYYYY!"

applause, applause, applause

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I've been writing for a while now, decided it was time to put more of my stuff out for critique.