All Comments on 'Pounded by the Bodybuilder'

by _MisterJ_

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I had a burly guy do this to me when I went to serve him divorce papers at his estate. He was huge!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Mm would love to see another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I liked Derek more when he was politely asking Chris about stYing to work out. Chris ended up doing him a favor in letting him stay. Then Derek calls Chris names -- faggot, slut, bitch -- when Chris is doing him a favor. Like Derek's looks -- blond chest hair, muscled body, big cock. But I lose respect with the name calling and rough treatment! Derek could be a nicer guy, I think.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

HOT, REALLY HOT!!! I'm hoping that you'll continue this story. Maybe have Derek bring his buddies to the Gym like he suggested for some late-night fun. Chris is such a good slut; I think he would enjoy being submissive in a gangbang situation. MLF

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

To the Anonymous who liked Derek more when he was polite. This is about Dom/Sub roll playing. Derek is a Dominant, hence the name calling and rough treatment. Chris enjoys being a Submissive, taking the abuse from an alpha male. This is not about being mean spirited or Derek being a bad guy. The two men are just fetishizing. All that being said, it would have helped if the author had tagged this story Dom/Sub. MLF

FrankieJuniorFrankieJunioralmost 2 years ago

This story was great; had me rock hard. I liked the dirty talk Derek gave. He was demeaning but so sexy at the same time. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That’s one of the best stories I have ever read. My cock was hard all the time. I would love to be fucked like that.

trappedinthecl0settrappedinthecl0setalmost 2 years ago

So HOT. I absolutely loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nooooo! No bringing more guys! Why it always have to be gangbang and not a more emotional ending? :(

NaplesjoeNaplesjoeover 1 year ago

Fantastic story, was hard through half of it! Love the verbal. A little more of how it stretched his pussy. More stories, please

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Made my cock rock hard loved it

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