All Comments on 'Power Divest Those Who Not Have It'

The title seems to paraphrase a witticism from an Italian prime minister, Giulio Andreotti: "Power wears out those who have not it" (Il potere logora chi non ce l'ha).

Nice story by the way.

You are in drastic need of an editor and proofreader. When her panties came off she had a bald pussy, yet a minute later she has a brush between her legs. Really fast growing hair. She lays her belly across his lap then in the next paragraph she is stretched over the desk. Did she levitate to get there? He uses quite the vocabulary for an 18 year old. What you would expect of an educator but not a teenage student. I would suggest that you think long and hard before posting anything else without some expert help with thought processes and the English language.

Somebody doesn't know how to properly use the word 'divest' in a sentence. Or, any other words, in any other sentences, apparently. Somewhere, an English teach has just slashed her wrists, or if already dead, rolling over in her grave at this travesty.

Nice story, but the language issues make reading it an effort - too big an effort to warrant reading another one I’m afraid. I guess English is a second language, so all credit to you for the standard you’ve achieved, but it’s extremely difficult to make something readable in a second language. An editor would sort the issues and help you to write better.

Needs a part two.