All Comments on 'Power Exchange'

by spartacusxyxy

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FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago
Well done

Intense does not require edgy and you have shown that here. The ebb and flow between them is both fun and erotic. It is all in the nuances back and forth. Some may not feel or see that. That's okay. Folks who put tabasco on everything no long taste the original flavors of the dish.

Look forward to more from you and perhaps more from these two?

small_town_girlsmall_town_girlover 10 years ago
Oooooh yes!

Sexy as hell. And beautifully written too. Loved it.

jhollanderjhollanderover 10 years ago
Perfect from start to finish

The intensity ramped up at a perfect pace creating a fast, hot read. I think those last words are some of my favorite ever to end a story.

FindmywayFindmywayover 10 years ago
Wonderful

Perfect story - very nicely done and I love the inner dialogue.

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