All Comments on 'Power Play'

The way it should be. Great storyline; great writing.

Thanks for the feedback - glad you enjoyed it!

A valuable story that may help other women train and control men. Amanda is doing a good job in progressing with the discipline and training. Many men need this.

Another great story from a great writer!

Thanks for the comments! You are too kind, Gentlemen.

*scurries off to keep writing on her current story...*

You are definitely my new favorite author in this genre. You weave a wonderful pegging story, all fun, no humiliation... just two people fully enjoying each other!

Billc393 - Thank you so much for your comments. I really appreciate you taking the time to tell me what you thought about my story! Nice to see you here. So glad people who prefer strap-on stories sans humiliation are finding me...

All the Best,

Ruby

aww, that was really well written and respectful but enjoyable!

i will be looking for a volunteer to stage a reenactment/tribute

-strange attractor

I loved this so much I recommended it to someone I know and they agree, this story is hot as hell and one of the best I've read.

And poorly delivered.

Give her one quick shot to the gut followed by one to her face, breaking her nose. Then throw the bitch out.

Well written. One of the best written stories I've read on here in a while. =)

The last two comments really puzzle me, honestly.

Your story was well written, erotic and left me wanting to read much more.

Loved your story. I am mostly a D, but have some S in me with a very small number of women. I like reading a woman's writing about how they think a man feels during that. I can't say it is my exprience, but from what I know from the female S's that I know, it is much better than what most men write about when talking from a female S's point of view. Very well done. I could switch with you. The only downside here was that you made me think so much that I got distracted from my intent. Please write more. and I will return to my intent.

You obviously put some effort into making sure your story was well written. Great work. Actually, I loved it. You described the feeling of being taken by the ass really well.

As a male Dom I found this story to be both hot and sweet, well written and without annoying grammatical and spelling mistakes. And, it convincingly conveyed the voice of the male main character. All good, five stars.

However, while it avoided the deep humiliation and emasculation of so many femdom stories (to each his own), it was otherwise completely conventional, without invention or surprise.

One more thing: I hate the word "junk" to denote male genitals. Really, junk? Very much worse in my view than "cunt", which although vulgar, has virtues: it is not a euphemism, but rather an honest, ancient, Anglo-Saxon word.

[End of rant.]