All Comments on 'Powers Ch. 00'

I suppose you could go in a lot of directions now. Bad news about the laptop, I hope you didnt lose too much. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC

You have the beginning of a very good story, I hope you can reconstruct the rest. I look forward to reading the whole thing.

That was quite the prolog and twist; I certainly didn't see that coming. Love to know what direction you took this.

You built up quite a good picture of an interestingly intelligent, masterful and highly sexed woman and those she worked with, and then apparently wiped all of them off the face of the Earth together with a few million others before she had hardly got past the introduction stage - what were you thinking of, unless you were planning to somehow resurrect her?

What's the point if you are going to say, "Hey, let me introduce you to Julia. She's an incredibly bright and hypersexual Government troubleshooter and - oops, I've wiped her out!"

PLEASE do not leave this here. Please take me somewhere else. I have used up all the oxygen available at this location, and I will need resusitation if you don't move me along with the story. My God, man, show a little mercy would you.

Write now man, right now man!!

Good Shit Maynard no go forward please. Lynn

Darn and all the thoughts in my head. Now where is the rest of this monstrosity?

But I assume there is little chance of this going forward after 5 yrs have passed.....

Plrease finish excellent story