All Comments on 'Practical Sex Education - Session 01'

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NudistGIna1NudistGIna1almost 4 years ago
Sex Ed.

Nice story. One of my fantasies is being part of a male/female teaching team to teach sex ed. to middle school students.

I did think the story ended a little abruptly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good idea

Too bad you didn’t really take your idea and “run with it.

Could have been a great story.

Go back, work on it, “flesh it out”. You’re (at least Should be!) telling a story. Expand it and let it flow. I think you can do it, but it Will take work!

top5pintop5pinalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Session 2 in the next week or so

It does end too abruptly. This first part was intended to just set the scene, I still hadn't really figured out exactly how I wanted Alex and Sarah's relationship to progress.

There's a short scene at the beginning of Session 2 that I really should have added to this part instead. Never mind, I'm learning as I go along.

Session 2 should be up sometime in the next week or so.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
loved it

found it really sexy! so much so, have been checking back for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Great start I am looking forward to part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More!

Great start. "And the crowd cried, 'MORE!'" Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
a request!

hurry up with the next episode(s)!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

quick ending, but good premise. looking forward to more.

screedbearscreedbearover 3 years ago
Love Sex Ed

I love Sex Ed stories.

Unfortunately I didn't find it as good as it could have been.

Looking forward to next chapter to see if it improves.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please continue

Really enjoyed this first chapter, really hope you continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

When will Session 2, 3, and 4 be made and readable. Its been a year.

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