by top5pin
Nice story. One of my fantasies is being part of a male/female teaching team to teach sex ed. to middle school students.
I did think the story ended a little abruptly.
Too bad you didn’t really take your idea and “run with it.
Could have been a great story.
Go back, work on it, “flesh it out”. You’re (at least Should be!) telling a story. Expand it and let it flow. I think you can do it, but it Will take work!
It does end too abruptly. This first part was intended to just set the scene, I still hadn't really figured out exactly how I wanted Alex and Sarah's relationship to progress.
There's a short scene at the beginning of Session 2 that I really should have added to this part instead. Never mind, I'm learning as I go along.
Session 2 should be up sometime in the next week or so.
found it really sexy! so much so, have been checking back for the next part!
I love Sex Ed stories.
Unfortunately I didn't find it as good as it could have been.
Looking forward to next chapter to see if it improves.