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Archtec77Archtec77over 5 years ago

This is a hot story. "delectable thirst trap". So sexy. #moreplease

LuganisLuganisover 5 years ago
Nice twist

A bit corny, but love it.

It seemed like coming out of the closet... but it was all to natural for a straight guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I like

That was hot. I hope they stayed together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Super hot and U kept the erotic stamina on high gear. I really enjoyed this story. Just wished I could “put in practice all these suggestions”while I was reading them

Super hot. I wish zI could be practicing all these instructions while reading them

Spadger2Spadger2over 4 years ago
A Twin Substitute

Very cleverly written story with a surprise twist at the end.

Looks like the beginning of a very close friendship?

Best wishes from Patrick

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot!!

I guess whatever it takes to make things happen! To bad Jonathan has boobs, twins could be a great time! But then that could rarely be as hot as the fantasy!

subbytubbysubbytubbyover 1 year ago

Love the sexual outcome and the sexcapades, hate the secrets and pulling of such tricks. Just hate the tricks. He could have said Hey, I'm his twin, can I come up? and gotten the same outcome.

Sunnydaze361Sunnydaze36110 months ago

The twin twist was great! Sexy and hot.

satinfeelsgreatsatinfeelsgreat10 months ago

great read with a twist. i hope there will be more of this story or similar.

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