by Ian_Snow
Alex is the sexiest and best looking of the three villainous boys. Since she follows Alex to college and eventually marries him, please give sexy Alex some chest air for that sexy chest, and hair for his manly abs. Great story!
I will admit that some parts are rushed, but this was an extremely good story otherwise. I think you have a fair chance of placing, if not winning, this contest.
Your writing is great. More stories, please, but I disagree that you need to continue. You ended quite well, though more sadly than I anticipated. I guess I’m just a sucker for Hallmark endings.
And 20 years from that foursome, Jaden and Tom meet up with Alex and Kate at the 20th high school reunion. The 4, plus Jaden's and Tom's wives, check into the town's best hotel for the weekend. The 3 couples - attractive dads and MILFs all, although all with a few extra pounds (which just add to the women's allure) - have left their kids at home. Of course, they have a super-charged sexual reunion, including the women being involved in all-women threesomes. Before they leave the hotel, they have already made plans to get together for the 25th reunion.