All Comments on 'Precious Monster'

by TamLin01

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sadlittlelostboysadlittlelostboyalmost 10 years ago
If Literotica would let me vote, I would give you a five

Sadly, voting is not working properly, and many users on Literotica cannot vote, including myself.

If I could vote, I would have given you a five, but, sadly, I cannot.

I hope this problem gets fixed soon.

sadlittlelostboysadlittlelostboyalmost 10 years ago
yay voting is fixed!

Good story, and now has one more vote. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
This is a repost. And not a good one either.

This was "Dr." Ashe first and only fucking case and she barely reads the file? What the fuck else does she have to do that's so fucking important. The complete lack of professionalism and regard for the primaries is...retarded. "I'm sorry, we have no idea how or why people close to her are killing themselves, so lets keep giving her new physicians to find out"? Seriously, what the fuck?

And how is it possible that Ashe didn't see where the blood was originating from or why did Lily want to go back to the hospital?

To many fucking questions and I don't care enough to want answers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A Succubus goes psychotic

This is very well written story, and a girl who only knows that she is monster, but doesn['t know anything else. From reading it I can tell she is a succubus who is mentaly ill to the point of psychosis. What is most disturbing is that she doesn't realize anything is wrong, and nobody will tell her otherr wise. I applaude the author of leaving the story opened. So, few writers do that these days.

random_girl90random_girl90almost 9 years ago

Very creepy and disturbing story. I think I could read anything you write, and enjoy it immensely. Yes it was stupid of the doctor to not read through the girls files completely, but I feel that you addressed this several times and even at the end had another character chastise her for not reading her files. So I was completely okay with that.

sowerofashsowerofashover 4 years ago
"should I call you... Mama?

LMAO, if I was in the mc's place I don't care how turned on I was I would burst out laughing if she directly quoted a porno at me!

PS ending was lame. OK for a horror but this is a porn site.

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