All Comments on 'Predator And Prey: The Hunt'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
LOVED IT

DEF worth expanding this universe with a few more couples and more with these two. Good work. Still a tad rough BUT a nice read.

imelodramaticimelodramaticover 4 years ago

This was amazing! I liked the subtle hints along the way that this was consensual play, with the "big bad wolf" using Beth's name several times. It made it more enjoyable and sexy to me, and then that ending is fucking adorable (his tail tapping against the couch aaawwww).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Freaking brilliant!

I read the tags, and with the subtle little hints it was clearly consensual. STILL the energy you wove through this story was remarkable. You could almost feel that wild desperation. Clearly the author is a pro at Primal play cause seriously... Damn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice Read

Super fun read. I hope there’s more expanding on this!

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