All Comments on 'Pregnancy Hangups Ch. 03'

Great writing, thank you.

A resolution, a true rarity on this site. But still plenty of room for more story. Maybe Jill accidentally forward the first video to her contact list. From their it spreads in the wild to all females with a screen to watch it on.

Nice and tidy. Looking forward to more of your stories.

Good job on your first story! It was very enjoyable and I think you handled the hypnosis very well. I hope you keep writing!

This is a very good first attempt. It’s a fun story wher everyone is happy getting what they crave. I would have introduced a negative emotion, some conflict to be resolved later to make it more interesting. For example, Don finding out one of the babies is not his or some jealousy between the friends.

Excellent story; I look forward to further episodes.