All Comments on 'Pregnant Presentation'

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GimmedatbellyGimmedatbellyover 2 years ago

Short and beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely amazing. I dream to one day make love to a pregnant woman. To go down on her and see that belly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

5- (4.6 = 92%, ❤💛💚💙💜)!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise.

But really a waste.

Sex is much too automatic. Much too fast starting.

Lacks the details that would/could have made it erotic.

As an axample, you wrote: " I firmly stroked his cock exactly four times before he shot his load all over my hand." I, for one, can't think of a less erotic description of a handjob.

He could have told her to slow down because he was so hot that he'd cum in a second if she didn't. She coud have slowed down. Or she could have played with his balls instead of his cock for a while. Or she could have told him OK, would he like to touch/play with her for a while?

So many things could have happened. Sou much potentially hot dialog wasn't there at all.

Two stars.

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