by gettinitdunn006
Absolutely amazing. I dream to one day make love to a pregnant woman. To go down on her and see that belly.
Good premise.
But really a waste.
Sex is much too automatic. Much too fast starting.
Lacks the details that would/could have made it erotic.
As an axample, you wrote: " I firmly stroked his cock exactly four times before he shot his load all over my hand." I, for one, can't think of a less erotic description of a handjob.
He could have told her to slow down because he was so hot that he'd cum in a second if she didn't. She coud have slowed down. Or she could have played with his balls instead of his cock for a while. Or she could have told him OK, would he like to touch/play with her for a while?
So many things could have happened. Sou much potentially hot dialog wasn't there at all.
Two stars.