by mlyn
oh the miracles of modern medicine. Getting a pregnancy test that works only a few days after conception!
This is a cute love story. I liked each n eavery part of it. Well narrated. It should have been more eloborated in chapter 3. Still it's nice. All the best.
That was a wow kind of story...i really enjoyed it..my only negative comment...i wish it where longer....smile
A great story, very well written ! A long one but I had a really good time reading it. Looking for sexstuff I found a jewel. Thanks ! Only one remark about credibility : 28 yo virgin ? Ready to mary such a stupid boy ? It could be my european pov but....
This is a story I'll read again and again.
Like "The Cruel Sea" and "A Connecticut Yaankee..."
Fantastic story and a joy to read something a bit more mature than some I've read!
Thank you!
Really loved this, an actual story rather than the self absorbed crap that some of the other 'authors' seem hell bent on submitting