All Comments on 'Presence Ch. 02'

I didnt expect this! This is amazing! You have me sitting on the edge of my seat here! Great chapter! I am sooooooooooooo looking forward to the next part! and I hope he gives Kenji a chance :)))) Thank you for this story

I lovee Kenji lol...i was not expecting that last line lol

Of all the things I didn't expect a horror romance. LOL

I check this story everyday to see if there's a new chapter! And finally it was here i read it last night and felt like I was reading Athur Conan Doyle's stories!!! I can't wait to see the next, post it soon please! The waiting is toturing me!

your writing is amazingly detailed, i love it and also hate it.

i am a massive massive wuss when it comes to anything surrounding the genre of horror, but i am loving the characters. so i will force myself through all the horror. reading this at night was not a wise choice...

More PLEASE - I love your stories!!! Keep them coming (",)

I'm in love with this story!!!!! I like kenji ALOT I hope they get together soon.....but I do have to agree with Daevid....reading this at night was a mistake lol

great i love the way u add so much detail but reading this at night wasn't so good lol

I suddenly wish that I'd not read this before I'm gonna turn in. Double damn me! The story rose goosebumps! AWESOME! :D

Yea! I've been waiting to read more of your writing since "Mirror Glass". Nice suspense. Good dialogue along with witty banter. I ache for Ash. Mmmm Kenji. *sigh* I always had a thing for Asians. You discribe the characters very well. Looking forward to the next chapter. Don't take too long.

Isnt it the picture he was making of dead pple popping out their graves.This story remind me of a novel that i read which is called The Bad Things.I like horric things.You are good & have a sharp imagination

Wild rice goes good with gravy

Sigh, this was such a strong start to what promised to be an amazing read. I wish the author had seen fit to finish it.