All Comments on 'Present Perfect'

by SleeperyJim

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greenday0418greenday0418over 3 years ago
For a minute

I was afraid I wouldn't like it. 5*

GinloverGinloverover 3 years ago

A beautiful cleverly constructed story. I love the ending. Although this is a birthday I’m sure there could be many men currently trying desperately to work out the perfect present.

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 3 years ago
That was truly lovely

The saying "It's the thought that counts" was never more true than in this story. Wonderfully written.

BarryJames1952BarryJames1952over 3 years ago

Another Sleeperly masterpiece.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 3 years ago

Interesting story!

5

MVarroMVarroover 3 years ago
Wonderful

That’s love

Thank you

SithLord6969SithLord6969over 3 years ago

Beautiful

We men are such stupid creatures

Another winner. 5 stars and a fave

PowersworderPowersworderover 3 years ago

I'm sure glad this was in the Romance category rather than Loving wives!

Nice story and a poignant message about devoting attention to your spouse.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Sweet ! Not explicit, not erotic. Enjoyable. We should all be able to satisfy our wives that way, and have them appreciate our thoughts

MsCherylTerraMsCherylTerraover 3 years ago

So beautiful. Love it!

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110over 3 years ago
Sweet

Something I think every wife would love.

RiverMayaRiverMayaover 3 years ago
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A perfect story, five stars, but should be more.

secretsalsecretsalover 3 years ago

D'awww! We should all be so lucky to have a Helga in our lives. And a Discworld reference to boot. Props.

chastenchastenover 3 years ago

A wonderful story!

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
So Much In A Page

Cannot believe it's that short but what a lot. 5 stars. As per Errol Brown "No doubt about it".

PierremanvisPierremanvisabout 3 years ago

Why this author is so good. So much said and emotions put to the reader... yet said in so few words. Brilliant

ranec1ranec1almost 3 years ago
Mean As!!

chur m8 awsum story

⭐⭐⭐⭐

NSCarterNSCarteralmost 3 years ago

Used to joke with a colleague about how we would only employ people who understood Terry Pratchett (Discworld) - but we never went wrong with this approach. You are so much better than the rest of us that it is ridiculous.

PierremanvisPierremanvisover 2 years ago

Glorious. Such a clever author. In this crappy world we need more of this delightful talent. Many thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

How about a divorce?! Now that will make a perfect present. LOL

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dgfergiedgfergieabout 2 years ago

Avery loving and clever wife to go along with our author.

inka2222inka2222over 1 year ago

Wow, and actual literally LOVING wife on LE. What are the odds! Thank you, a wonderful warm story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A beautiful little tale with an object lesson for givers and receivers, if they can understand.

Thanks for the memory.

-jog

StubbyoneStubbyoneabout 1 year ago

Loved it. Time spent with a loved one is more precious than any gift.

5-😊😊😊😊😊

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I cannot believe the low rating for this wonderful story!

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