by SleeperyJim
A beautiful cleverly constructed story. I love the ending. Although this is a birthday I’m sure there could be many men currently trying desperately to work out the perfect present.
The saying "It's the thought that counts" was never more true than in this story. Wonderfully written.
Beautiful
We men are such stupid creatures
Another winner. 5 stars and a fave
I'm sure glad this was in the Romance category rather than Loving wives!
Nice story and a poignant message about devoting attention to your spouse.
Sweet ! Not explicit, not erotic. Enjoyable. We should all be able to satisfy our wives that way, and have them appreciate our thoughts
D'awww! We should all be so lucky to have a Helga in our lives. And a Discworld reference to boot. Props.
Cannot believe it's that short but what a lot. 5 stars. As per Errol Brown "No doubt about it".
Why this author is so good. So much said and emotions put to the reader... yet said in so few words. Brilliant
Used to joke with a colleague about how we would only employ people who understood Terry Pratchett (Discworld) - but we never went wrong with this approach. You are so much better than the rest of us that it is ridiculous.
Glorious. Such a clever author. In this crappy world we need more of this delightful talent. Many thanks
Wow, and actual literally LOVING wife on LE. What are the odds! Thank you, a wonderful warm story!
A beautiful little tale with an object lesson for givers and receivers, if they can understand.
Thanks for the memory.
-jog
Loved it. Time spent with a loved one is more precious than any gift.
5-😊😊😊😊😊