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by WillSeeking

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MsQuoteMsQuotealmost 12 years ago
Oooh!

Really nice vignette. A creative take on the workplace/office theme. What a sexy couple and I like the tension from the douchebag trying to move in on the woman. I'd recommend polishing this up a bit by tweaking the verb tenses and punctuation.

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