All Comments on 'Pressure'

Great short story! Very engaging and hot!

This was beautifully written. I loved how you provided some world-building to your character, and a lot of times I would advise people to add more physical descriptions to their lead, but I think the lack of description works here. It makes me feel like I'm Nelda, and I'm being taken by a savage in the most vile and delicious way.

Your terminology also fits with the time period, which I appreciate. I was slightly disappointed that the sex didn't go on longer, like they didn't go another round, but I suppose that's saved for after the events of this story.

Despite being non-consensual, it still thrilled me to see how you naturally had Nelda enjoy the man who violated her body and home. It didn't feel rushed at all, and by the end of the tale, I was begging for more.

Well done, and keep up the good work <3

Just my kind of story! I loved it !