All Comments on 'Pressure Massage'

Good Story. Massages were hot though it got a bit odd when she turned into a towel. Needs more work. Could possibly have been better as a first person rather than diary entries /letters to her husband as that was a little confusing to follow.

I enjoyed reading that critique, and, as to the towel TF, lemme put it like this... For about an hour after I wrote it, I just... Sat there, blinking, because, while I've written an odd TF before (Tea Party), that one was... Well, even I was a little confused, and I wrote it!

I can certainly appreciate the idea of writing it from a traditional first person perspective, and this was mainly an experiment, just as Don't Forget To Comment was. I think perhaps I could have made it more clear what was a diary entry, and what was a letter, but overall, I'm satisfied with how it turned out.

I agree the post-towel bit was odd, I think I was having trouble coming up with a good resolution that fit the theme...

Lesbians are not married to men. Lesbians are women who love and have sex with other women ONLY!

...I do not in fact remember *putting* this in Lesbian Sex. I assume the editors thought my original tag of SF/F was not suitable (If I am wrong, editors, I do apologise.) Also... I have attempted to find the Bi section you are referring to, and it is neither in the index, or a submission category (Which is, to be fair, a large oversight, for which I give thanks to you drawing my attention to.)

So yes, you are correct. As such, I am submitting an edit with the tags added by the editor.

Honestly this story through me... Between the letter/diary format, and the typos, I lost track of what I was even reading. The concept was solid. I might even call it hot, but there were a lot of moments that made me lose immersion.

As a final note, I think this story belongs in the horror section, due to the almost dementia like symptoms she showed as she lost herself. The ending left me feeling unsettled.