All Comments on 'Pretense'

Pt 2 bred and re bred

Sweet!

Hope there is a part 2 coming soon. an easy 5 stars.

Incredible erotic work. Congratulations!

Instant favorite. Bravo, indeed.

Oh God. So fucking hot.

I would have given it 5 stars if possible. You are a very talented writer with an imagination to die for! Hope to see more of your work soon.

Very very sexy story. I hope Annie, who needs a damn good spanking, and Jake, have another story in them.

Wow

holly cow, this was stunning.. You are damn talented.. thank you for this beautiful brother sister romance story.. and a huge thx for keeping it just in-between them.. no ntr, no cheating, no sharing, no swinging!! thx, that's really rare nowadays.. 10/5

Confusing sex positions when they were on the couch...was she on her stomach over his lap with a pillow between them or not? Doesn't matter, your story was extremely hot. Thank you.

awesome flow. loved the way you kept the sarcasm and joke stay until the very end. that was an awesome touch. keep penning more like these

Really great dialogue. Well done, mate.

5/5, definitely needs a chapter 2. Really like impregnation stories.

Great use of wit within a storyline of steamy mutual seduction. Enjoyed every minute of your powerful elixir of love and lust. Well done - an easy 5 stars!

Hilarious and realistic at the same time. A great combination. I have known more than one Annie and life was seldom dull when they were near. Excellent story. I laughed nearly nonstop. Easily five stars.

Absolutely loved this story. One of my all time favourites on this site. Very well crafted, with sparky, witty and, importantly, realistic dialogue. And incredibly sexy.

Great, great work. Thank you.

The dialogues is sooo hot

Great story.....part 2 please

Sisters (or mothers) calling their brothers (or sons) daddy is so damn hot and is so hard to find. How you do more of that in future stories

Needs a epilogue at least

Perfection. Now I need more. A lot more. About how they get pregnant. About how they tell their parents, who slowly come to accept them. How they learn to be parents together. So romantic ❤️

More, more, more!