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Anonymousabout 5 years ago

If he actually wanted her that bad he would break up with his girlfriend

Umbra_Ella over 4 years agoAuthor

Re: "...he would break up with his girlfriend"

Are you saying that's how you wish the story ended? I might take that into consideration for Part Three... kind of a 'full circle' for the two of them. Thanks for the feedback!

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