All Comments on 'Pretty as a Picture'

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
This is sadism

This is sadistic behavior. Sadism and Narcissistic behaviors go hand in hand sometimes. They say "I will enjoy hurting you and see how good I do it." Run far and fast if you find these two and they aim at you. Leaving these alone can save your life. It really depends on your own masochistic leanings and how deeply those go. Communicate with your Significant Other honestly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
And she still won't understand

When her dead body is wrapped in that plastic sheet covered with all that has drained from her body. When she is dropped in the deep woods and covered with whatever leaves and branches are about. When animals scatter her bones. When years from now all that is left of her is in a box marked Jane Doe. When he is teaching yet another these same lessons in desperation to belong and misplaced trust.

Well written and nauseating. Might be better in reluctance/noncon as consent is lost along the way.

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