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by RevHale

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was great! Hoping to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent story, the first 2 chapters have been well worth it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I truly loved the first two chapters of this story when you originally posted them on the EMCSA, and revisiting them here has been just as enjoyable. With you reposting them here under a new title I'm hoping that means maybe the story will continue past the abrupt end it received in the 3rd chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ooooh, I can't wait to read what happens next..

asianToyasianToyover 1 year ago

Wow, such good writing.

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linktr.ee/RevHale John Hale was born and raised in the heart of the Rust Belt. His first novel was banned from local Elementary schools after to giving the other students nightmares. Inspired by Faulkner, John once drunkenly composed 80 pages of incomprehensible rubbish in a ...