All Comments on 'Pretty Young Thing Pt. 01'

I don't blame married people straying.

This story is about real life, with healthy sexual appetite.

A bit more detail of the illicit time together would add excitement to the adventure.

Thanks for submitting this.

Anon, I deeply appreciate your comment, because that's exactly what I was aiming for,pornography that's more grounded in realism, I mean shit, why cant smut be art right? hehe. A friend advised me to be more descriptive aswell so I promise the next one will have more weight to it via the sex scenes. Stay tuned

...that is a fucked up family.

I did like how they salvaged their marriage at the end. Nice an believable but hopeful. Very well done, sir.

I like this alot ^^