All Comments on 'Prey'

I think that only a piece of shit would glorify violence against a woman

I enjoyed your story. And I would like to read more.

What does she look like, and when is he going to give her some comfort? Let her bathe and relax. Give her some lotion to rub on her aching body. Put her in a room that has a sink, toilet,bath tub and a bed, and let her become adjusted to her new life. Get her used to being fucked how and whenever he wants to use her. Make her exercise to keep in shape, and only feed her foods that will make her body strong. Teach her that the better she behaves the better she will be treated. Above all keep her body soft and sexy, making her do her finger and toe nails, along with her hair and make up. Keep her looking like a little porcelain doll.Through her training she will except that you own her and that she is your property to do with as you see fit.

Please keep writing!

This is a hot story. Great touches of control and violence. I liked the vague appearances and setting. This kept true to the feeling of a dark-dream that permeated your writing. Keep writing. I wanted to read the next time, and the next.

Hot story! Can't wait for the next chapter... Get busy already!!