All Comments on 'Prey of the Cougar'

Great story, I love all of your stories. Please write more 😉

Good premise.

But the sex happens too abruptly. And it's over too soon.

He likes her breasts. She knows he likes her breasts. Why not tease him with her breasts? Why not start with them fully clothed and have dialog about how much she loves attention paid to them? Does he like them? What would he like to do to them? Would he like to see them? Should she take her bra off? How do they look? Would he like to touch them? And so on.

The blowjob simply begins to abruptly. And it seems as if she's in a hurry to finish it and him. Better to take her time, have him going crazy, but not quite enough to force him over the edge for a while.

Had great potential. Didn't deliver.

Three stars.