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All Comments on 'Priestesses of the Goddess Pt. 10'

by Tara Cox

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Worst chapter so far

You REALLY need a word processor with "grammar check" to help you catch correctly spelled words that are misused; "lead" for "led" for example. It will also catch those sentences that make no sense at all as written.

Having to stop and decipher a sentence completely stops the flow of the writing and hurts the story.

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