All Comments on 'Primal Creatures'

Love the story, next chapter please. AAAAAA++++++

Very good. Please continue with it. Thank you

Amazing!

Fabulous first effort!!

Very good! More please.

Really good fun to read. Thank you.

[17.04.23]

TREMENDIOUS 1st story!

11/10!!!!!

This was an awesome read. Please continue to make more.

Good taste

NICEEEEEEEEEE

I was into it until the random extreme violence

Really liked it, as for me the story was conclusive in its own fantasy world. Everything seemed logical and within the fantasy, right - until anal sex at the first time.

Never experienced or heard of any female who would be able to endure, much less enjoy full anal at the first time so that this kind of ruined the end for me.

Might have been avoidable by adding a piece of story about the male having anal sex with a human while she was in the room to give credibility to the plot.

Also the explicit language used by her - not fitting the plot with at least a hint where and how she might come to understand it. Hard to believe she‘s not aware / understands of basic hygiene (which even a cat manages) but knows anal and explicit slang.

Still, good read except that - thanks. Would love further chapter(s).

Some story!!!

Definitely needs another chapter