All Comments on 'Primal Evolution'

Thanks for reading! This is an ongoing story I will add more soon! Please leave comments or give feedback. It helps me realize holes or errors and inspires me to write more. Thank you guys so much!

Peace :)

just read your story and i loved it. would have given five stars but your female changed her tune way to quick. can not wait to read more.

Interesting start can't wait to read more!

this is a great concept, and i am really enjoying it! it could use a little more lead up and time in some areas. i am really interested to see the next chapter!

A very excellent werewolf story with an excellent plot and excellent character development. I will be looking forward to you continuing this excellent story. Now that he has bitten her twice and drawn blood she should also transform into a werewolf. Please continue writing this wonderful story for I will be looking for further chapters. Retired Army NCO

Oh please write more! This story is amazing!!!

I loved the story and your writing style. Keep it up, please!

Hello everyone! Thank you all for the feedback and comments. I'm currently working on the second part to this story and an editor has approached me via email to help me with this one. I've noticed several mistakes in the first (oops). Hope you're as excited as me :)

and an interesting storyline. Looking forward to more from you.

This was amazing. Give me more

That was brilliant. I can't wait for part2.

I am literally tearing up about not being able to read more this is such a tease I want more and so dose she. This is amazingly written and I might join just to watch u

I know we all have our daily lives, but if you don't finish this as a series or at least have a sequel, I'll never forgive you!!!!!!!!!!!! But seriously great story.

2nd part is up

He was telling the truth and he is indeed a beat

Beat should probably be beast

Beyond that awesome work hope u continue it

This story is amazing! Thank you for the well written plot and intense details. I enjoyed how easy to follow this story was, even with such a nice amount of detail and bit of background story. Can't wait to read the next segment! :)

More please!

How do you people not see nonconsent as rape? Isn't that in the f***ing definition of it? You are part of the problem. If I could 0 star your rapist ass, I would.

This was great! Unlike some true rape fiction, there's a very fine, and gray line between true rape and when a woman kind wants a guy, but just doesn't want to be taken...

It's a line only freaks walk, and unfortunately the devils that rape women who don't want them at all or even know them, are just that, devils. There are women in this world, that would accept a man who has this kind of fetish and even help him with it, or how to train it. Rape is disgusting, but obsession is powerful.