Primal Fantasies: Wolf

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Soon, his fingers clutched at her hair and he moaned.

"W- wait," he stuttered as his hands felt her long, furred, ears. "Wh- wh- what's wr- wrong with-!"

He came and she moaned, holding him tight and swallowing his load. Her hand stroked him as her throat rumbled with a deep, growling purr.

A thick web of skin pushed at her hand as she squeezed the base of his cock. She felt it press against her lips as her long tongue worked around his cock. The webbing grew, pulling the boy's dick down as thick skin began to form around it.

Sharp points dug into her scalp and the boy groaned. She felt hairs tickling the palm of her left hand as she held his thigh. They grew dense in wiry scratching waves to brush against her hand.

Candy turned on her knees and fell to all fours. She crawled forward and raised her ass, wagging it back and forth while looking back at the boy. Drool fell from his lips as they trembled to show huge, sharp fangs. He looked scared - confused but aroused as gold dots formed in his eyes. Her teats ached as they swelled on her body. Drops of translucent milk dripped from their tips until the surrounding fur lengthened to absorb them.

Standing, he fell to the ground around her to press his cock against her. She felt the thick sheath brushing her pussy lips and snarled in frustration until he leaned back and entered her, shoving deep inside. She felt his head growing narrow and then cried out as it filled her - his entire cock inflating inside of her.

The boy snarled as he slammed against her, pinning her to the ground. She raised her hips in wild encouragement, angling herself so the boy's changed cock could fit her better.

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Joseph leapt to the stage, pulling down the Asian woman as she took another turn. Beside the stage, Kelly held two cocks in her hand and Candy was on all fours in between the tables, screaming and huffing as she came again and again.

The Asian woman pushed away, her eyes wide in terror as her glossy black hair pooled beneath her.

He grabbed her bra and pulled, freeing her small breasts. She covered herself with her arms while screaming for help but his claw found the string of her panties and he pulled, snapping them apart. She pressed her thighs together to try to hide her nakedness.

In the corner of his eyes, he spotted the bouncer running for him. Kelly shoved herself up and then lowered herself, ready to pounce. The second man, standing behind her, growled as she pulled free from him and his cock bobbed in the air, slick with her arousal. The tip of it was twisting into a sharp point.

Kelly slammed into the bodyguard, clawing and biting but Joseph turned away. He knelt over the woman, licking her mouth as he lowered himself, pressing his huge cock against her belly. She cried and begged but the words were lost to him as he bent lower to lick at her nipple. Her hands beat at his head and back but he kissed along her body until his hot breath tickled her pussy.

"Please," the woman said, forcing her legs together even tighter. "Please don't. Please- oh god!"

Joseph's tongue rasped against the woman's bare pussy as his leathery paws forced her legs apart. His thick arms surrounded her legs and the claws tipping his thumbs pressed against her labia, spreading her wide open. She struggled against him as he licked between her petite pussy lips, again and again.

"Please," the woman said weakly. "Please, don't. I- I- Oh- Oh fuck."

Her clit swelled against his wide tongue, slipping free from the hood before it grew to cover it. Her labia pulled against his claws as they began to press together but he still forced his tongue inside of her.

"Something-" she panted, her head falling back. "Fuck! Something's- Something's wrong!"

Sharp black hairs sprouted from her pussy lips. He pulled them into his short muzzle, nipping and licking at them as the girl moaned. She bucked as his tongue worked against her clit and her scream broke into a human-like howl as veins stood out on her reddened throat.

"I can't-" she panted, staring at him. "Think. Need. Need it."

She twisted, pulling away to raise her ass, waving it until he mounted her, his fur brushing against her bare back. Her hand snaked beneath her body, fingers desperately trying to spread her pussy open for him, not realizing how far they'd changed.

He speared her and she snarled in pleasure, taking the length of him and more. Taking his knot until her lips wrapped around the base of him, locking them together.

Her words became guttural as the tips of her ears slid through her silky hair and fur grew along her shoulders. She came again and then a third time as his engorged knot bulged against her clit.

The screech of her claws on bare wood was lost in the sounds of people changing - growling and screaming and moaning and howling.

Another server pressed herself against the wall as the bouncer, half naked with fur lining his body in patches, cornered her. His cock bobbed free while he forced her to the ground.

Joseph pounded into the Asian girl and she came again, bucking against him while snarling and growling. She writhed, trying to speak as yet another orgasm wracked her body. Sweat coursed down her body to mix with the black fur growing over her.

When Joseph finally came, she scored the floor and snapped at his arm with sharp teeth. White showed at the edges of her honey hued eyes as she collapsed beneath him, panting and twitching from the enormous amount of orgasms and the aftershocks that followed them.

He wasted no time, pulling out of her painfully to bound over to a naked woman running through the club to the exit.

An hour later, the doors to the club opened and they flooded the streets in search of more to turn.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The whole sheath thing is confusing. Did he leave it at home or did he somehow put it back on before he left? Why is he growing webbing? It's a wolf, not a duck, right?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why does a human/werewolf grow webbing? What's the knot? Is the guy still wearing the sheath?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There is confusing and potentially missing language. He took the sheath off. "pulling his cock free from the sheath and setting it carefully down on the end table," Then he's in the car and you're talking about _his_ sheath as if you're calling his penis a sheath. "The thin webbing of skin holding his hairless sheath in place thickened" "A lustful groan escaped his lips as he squeezed his sheath." But wait, now it sounds like the sheath is the appliance again. "The head of his already-hard cock forced the tip of his sheath open as it emerged. His sheath bulged around his dick" Is he meant to be wearing the werewolf sheath when he leaves his house? We're led to believe he left it on the end table.

"a loud two-tone emergency beep sounded from his phone" That's a good way to let us know his werewolf-enhanced ears can pick up sounds that he might not have otherwise heard, like a text message or delivery notification tone from a phone wedged in between couch cushions, but we're specifically told it's an emergency tone. I'm left wondering to what emergency did his phone try to alert him, but that detail is abandoned and we're never told. If it wasn't an emergency and it was just the delivery notification he heard, calling it an emergency tone is misleading and confusing.

"Blood coursed through his body, leaving a pounding ache between his temples." Blood is always coursing through our bodies. The statement comes off as redundant and unnecessary and elicits a "Well, duh" from the reader.

This whole paragraph has me confused as to where his penis is and the mechanics involved. "A thin web of skin grew from the base of his cock as he drove. It spread slowly, pulling at his hard dick. He felt the soft tip move against his leg as the webbing spread, inching along his belly. Pre-cum leaked from the tip of his throbbing cock, smearing against his thigh until his dick lay centered mid-belly. The strange line of skin continued up his cock until it was two inches away from the head." Is it against his leg or his belly? You're describing it against his leg and his belly at the same time within the same sentences. If it's meant to have risen from his pant leg, how? I'm under the impression that hard penises generally don't leave the pant leg of pants that have a zipper and rise to lay on the belly without assistance while you're in a sitting position driving a car.

That whole description of the webbing along with the two paragraphs below is also confusing.

"Excess flesh flowed from his crotch (that you described above as starting from the base of his penis), spreading up and over his loose ball sack and dick." Where is his ball sack that excess flesh travels up and over it? The ball sack generally sits on the seat of the car under the penis. "He scratched the itchy growth as it flowed up, further and further until it covered the fat head of his cock."

"The thin webbing of skin holding his hairless sheath in place thickened"

You continually talk about webbing and further on a knot throughout the story. By the end I still don't understand what they are, what they're supposed to look like, or what they do. I keep thinking about what I know about webbing and mammals in general and werewolves and humans specifically to make sense of it. And straight up - what is the knot? The webbing and the knot continually have me rereading passages to see if I missed something, but I haven't.

There's more, but this is already a lot for such a short story. The last thing I'm left wondering is how Joseph became infected, so to speak. Everyone he scratches or bites begins transforming immediately, faster than he did it seems. Did the sheath scratch or cut him when he put it on or took it off? You say it was easy to put on, although it did not seem like it was prelubricated with anything because he had to use his spit to put it on. It also seems he had no difficulty taking it off.

It's a good premise with lots of potential. It's difficult for me to remark on the pacing because of the problems that had me continually rereading passages. I'm genuinely curious about the questions I posed, because with those and the other points cleared up, the story could be really compelling. I look forward to seeing if you do a rewrite.

lorrisuelorrisueover 1 year ago

Started very hot....the end was a little disappointing though. Favorited anyway

mac1729mac1729over 1 year ago

Short and sweet. Love it

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