by marriedtosister
WOW! Please keep going with this story as I'm sure that things will get more complicated as the demands of ruling the kingdom are met by these two. 5 stars all the way!
please a simple request to the author don't add orgies or another person in their relationship and i hope that adam will be satisfied by his sister..
I don't plan on having another person in this particular relationship. I love that Sarah is ready to serve her brother in EVERY WAY, so it would be a betrayal of her total sexual openness and willingness for to please him.
I hear what you are saying, author and I applaud you for it this is none of those stories where one can feel the sexual tension as if it has leapt off the page. Thanks for an enthralling read.
I realize that this is fiction, but still and all you need to stop putting modern conveniences like 'showers' in what appears to be a medieval setting. 🤔 Even though you attempted to explain it away with the whole pressurized water convenience, it still doesn't work well. 😒 Neither does the modern slang inserted into the dialog.
Apart from those irritating items, I'm enjoying this story. 4/5
So nice story! The best couple brother and sister. Just like me and my younger sister of two years.