All Comments on 'Princess'

I hope there more to princess and happens next to her. Mmmmmmmmmm

In sci-fi?

Excellent story. Although I did cringe a bit when she put on that expensive dress without washing her greasy hair and without being bathed, lotioned and perfumed first. I think there was a bit of a missed opportunity for you there. Oh well, you can always put that in the sequel.

For one shot, perfect with a proper lacquered finish.

If the story is meant to have continuation, I would be sad that Becky got erased completely at the start.

Excellent story.... would love to see another chapter

It is a good story for a one shot. The superiority of the corper is established and the MC is dissected bit by bit. Though if it is going to be a series then it feels like everything has already happened here. Unless you are going to bring back the MC's memories for them to take at their loss of control.

This is written brilliantly. You built out the world quickly and thoroughly. I was immediately immersed. You described the technological aspects of her fall in an incredibly intuitive way.

I could feel her disorientation as her world was pulled out from under her.

I would say that my only critique is that there isn't tons more of this story to read, but you wrote such a well-crafted ending that I feel sated.

Thank you for sharing this story <3

Well done from start to finish. This story is proof that you don’t need sex to be sexy. It’s just fun, disturbing but fun nonetheless.

For my own personal enjoyment, I would have added a post-script six months later to sate our depraved imaginations 😜