All Comments on 'Princess'

by Viktor_Delacroix

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

It was good please do a part two

biercebierceabout 11 years ago
Nice warm up

Nice build. You leave us wanting to know what is next. Thanks

Mordecai91Mordecai91about 11 years ago
Really?

I'm sorry but where is the build up. All we got was a small paragraph or two to introduce the characters but no interest or even why they are together.. or how it came about.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Great build up can't wait for your next story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Boring

There was no build up at all. Completely waste of time reading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

There needs to be a part 2, maybe more - I'm intrigued about the downfall of Sarah-Jane.

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