All Comments on 'Princess Charming Ch. 01'

Lots of stuff going on here, great building blocks for coming chapters.

since the princess is the heroine, I wonder which paring would be

- the princess tame the sorcerer (Baldassare seems to be a challenge)

- the knight wins the heart of the princess

- or the Princess and her witch live happily ever after

one of my favorite paring is the Knight and the witch

hope author write more on this type of story.

This particular story is going to be complicated, I could say yes to all pairing scenarios and also say that there are others too. I have big plans for this one and nothing will be off limits :þ

overall I enjoyed it and esp the end ...what an ass her father is. I liked how pissed she got and look forward to seeing what she will do...though I assume to hand it to dad she'll choose the 'low born' knight.

I have to say though that if people react the same to f/f as m/m, this should be in the lesbian section. If a story has the least m/m component people rail about it, yelling about it belonging in no section but gay male. Though somehow I would be willing to guess that they don't react equally about the f/f component in this. at least the guys won't!

Your editing capabilities are truly abysmal, if you took two whole days to edit and then posted 'this'. I shudder to even think about what it'd have been before. Horrendous grammar.

I'm sorry, I can not take your criticism seriously, you have no courage to post your complaint under your own identification. My editing skills/grammar/spelling/etc is not the best, I admit that freely and do not need someone to point it out, so you wasted your time unless the sole purpose was to entice me to give you a witty comeback in which congratulations, you succeeded.

My writing must be that bad as this very piece has been plagiarized on another site by someone who has also stolen my screen name, feel free to insult them as you have done with me, adding in their poor choice of writing they chose to steal.

As you are so hung up on my technical skills, I invite you to educate me through a private message. I am not very good with English even though it is my native tongue, I am working towards a degree in mathematics and can speak 'computer' adequately enough to keep me out of trouble. I just want to tell a story, if the story is not of your liking then I suggest you find another story to read, leaving the negative and unhelpful criticism off the comments. Constructive and precise criticism is always welcome but flat out insults are not. I hope the next person you plan to cut down a peg or two is not someone who is easily intimidated, your acid tongue can harm a creative mind in very bad ways and a bully is a bully and you are a bully, albeit a shit one.

A superb start, but marred by systemic grammatical errors. You should have this edited and re-submit it (or post the edited version separately). Aside from the grammar, it's quite excellent.

I'd be happy to serve as your editor if you're ever so inclined. :)