All Comments on 'Princess of The Elves Ch. 01'

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IvrioneIvrione10 months ago

You're back! ...and with more elves! Hooray! I've got to say, having such a dreadful main character as the pov is a bit rough, but I have a feeling *princess* Sindri will end up being a much better person than Prince Sindri ever could have dreamed of being. Nice seeing the connection to the old characters, too, with the mention of Landa and, presumably, Braith. I'm so happy you've come back to the setting already! I absolutely adore the world you've created here. <3

ShortyMacShortyMac10 months ago

Interesting story. I think I wouldn’t mind be a captive of these She-elves being mostly a bottom. I think the story deserves a 10 star rating…… 🤤

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

More! Yes!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Oh a new elven story, thanks... The founding of a new Wild Elves settlement in a "caribbean" setting with a Teagan-like character. Originally sent on a mission with a friend from Landa's settlement to maintain relations with their isolated brethens in the southern kingdoms, the ship of the disguised Jericka wrecked on this island. She eventually converted the other survivors, Imani and Riley. They slowly learned how to survive and began to thrive on what they now called home as they carefully added more wrecked sailors to their "family" in the following decades. The main maritime trade route between the northern and southern kingdoms, the region was plagued with pirates and cannibal tribes as well as vicious storms.

-"She'd been in one of the other boats with her brother Colin." I wonder if Alma and Colin will make a comeback at some point

-"Almost no one lives on these islands." Maybe a Wednesday and Crusoe type of story later with a member of the local tribe of islanders...

-"Jericka and the others were welcome by five other she-elves." So they are only 8... 9 now... Maybe more in later chapters

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Man...wholesome/horny is always the best kinda horny. Sign me up for that sort of treatment!

notbreckenridgenotbreckenridge8 months agoAuthor

Thank you all for the interest and the kind words. Had some issues come up and some computer problems too. I just submitted Chapter 2 for publication. Sorry for the long wait.

ArtickArtick3 months ago

I love the world you created and always enjoy reading your stories. Keep up the good work! <3

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This is lovely! Wonderful setting and very interesting premise. I like Sindri - a little haughty but mostly just cute. His thoughts are fun to read. The elves are very nice too - their communal sisterly way of life is quite appealing. And the writing is top notch <3

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