All Comments on 'Princess Prick Tease Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This--

"Inside she did a little happy dance, she wasn't some love struck girl that would follow him around like a puppy in case he deigned to look her way"--

works really well if you're too scared to "follow him around."

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
"Mantle of the Forlorn Vanquisher"

There are serious benifits to shyness--

You could be agonizing over not being able to talk to people.

And you could be seen as cool.

Not one to fall for--whatever--

you wear the mantle

of ... timidity

you have

dignity??

(See also the "Encumclaw Horse Sex Case" by Caroline Keene)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I don't know where to get the forlorn stuff--

"Where do you get the forlorn gear?

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3725 Edited by Droldine on 2/8/11 6:23 PM (PST) I want to get Valor gear but I don't know where do get the forlorn stuff i need for other gear. so ... "

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Grammar.

K, only because I love your stories and HATE grammatical errors, it's "faint" to pass out or very hard to make out. Feint is a distraction move, like in swordplay. So you feint with your sword, but you faint dead away or hear a faint sound. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
more....

I wish would continue with this story and hurry up and move on with the unremarkable and unrelatable 12 tables

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This has been one of my favorite stories I’ve ever read! Please make more and more chapters!

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