All Comments on 'Prismatic High Pt. 01'

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Aside from a single typo (sliver instead of silver) this was an awesome start! Can't wait to read more.

I love dragon stories and this one tickled that itch beautifully.

I'd love to see more of this in the future. Gonna sign up for your patreon right now.

But 'just met' fucking and no consequence cheating just isn't my cup of tea.

I don't want to spoil anything, but I have SOME twists and turns planned for my story, Hobomonarchy.

It will need a few twists!

djb

Loved it. Great start. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

I came for the sex and stayed for the story. With a few modifications, these stories could have all explicit elements removed and be compiled into mainstream novels, of the urban fantasy/fish out of water genres!

One. I saw one typographical error in this entire work.

Your conspicuous lack of grammatical problems, deformed sentence structures, misused homophones, and obviously-autocorrected nonsense made this story a delightful breath of fresh air on this site! In fact, I was so pleased by this that my appreciation for your wonderful writing style and gorgeous imagery was diminished. You can blame the other authors here for that.

Thank you for proofreading before submitting! Wonderful story.

Pacing wad awful. Scenes felt like they came from a super cheesy anime. Can't take anything happening seriously. Don't think I'll be reading more

He is not quite 18 his mother is in her 40s, which means she deliberately chose to raise her son with an abusive asshole cult member who would have killed her son had he know the truth

What kind of fucking monster does that to a child?

Like most of your work, this story is well written. Plot wise it seems more like a story you did for fun rather than something taken seriously though, there are some plot holes and things that need to be looked over to really enjoy it.

Once I put myself in the mindset of, this story is just for the lols and is fun, it was a lot more enjoyable

Not my type, raised as a dragon killer, you'd think his dragon obsessed mother wouldn't like that, the MC also didn't have anything to say to his mother after finding out she's a cheating piece of shit

stopped reading when i realized it was subpar horny dragon whore mom sht