All Comments on 'Prismatic High Pt. 02'

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Ok now what the hell is going to happen?

I sure dont'! :D

About an hour ago I posted a comment on Part 1 about how pleasing it was to read something on Literotica that wasn't littered with grammatical errors...

...and then I read this.

Diggin' the story, can't wait until the next chapter, but man! Please proofread.

Thank you for the comments and I am glad you are enjoying the story! I am sorry for the errors that have slipped through in proofreading and editing but my short stories found on my tumblr, on literotica, and the other places I post these are intended as first drafts. I am not earning enough from writing to be a full time writer (yet) and as such have professional commitments beyond writing that require my time in addition to the time spent on meeting deadlines for my published works.

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I think the dragons would know about d13 and the nsa. Cool story though .

Have you mentioned why his family was pretending they weren't dragons?

Why does he still feel guilty for cheating on his girlfriend when she's just a government spy? And why did she admit this to him to begin with?

Very disappointed.

She only got with him to spy on him, and lied about being a devout christian so she could avoid anything sexual. There was no relationship to begin with far as she's concerned. And she had the nerve to act hurt when his dragon urges take over, after his brain explodes from learning he's a dragon. She's so full of shit. Poor Darryl. He's better off without her.

So a government agency finds out the son of a dragon slayer family is actually a dragon because his mom had an affair, so they send in a teenage agent who happens to go to the same school (most likely) to date him and get him tagged...because reasons. This then leads to problems because the kid ends up going to an obvious dragon school to be train so the agent freaks out that they’re going to find out that the humans know about them...and this agent is also hurt because her fake boyfriend cheated on her and immediately apologized for it...while she’s been lying the whole time. Wow the first part was fun and light hearted and now we have this overly complicated plot *sigh*

So she is mad at Darryl for being a dragon when she clearly understands what dragons do and how they have relationships and she lied to him the whole time yet Darryl has to apologize? And what’s worse is Darryl goes along with it? This isn’t consistent. Was really liking the story till Sasha got involved. Can’t finish it now

Yaaaa ima go with a big this sucked real bad. She lies to him, uses him, fakes a relationship, bugs him and then manipulates him into apologizing to her. Why does this story have so many toxic people? The mom and dad are horrible people, the girlfriend is just the worst and he just takes it all.

Bad look man, bad look.