by MicheleNylons
I honestly am surprised by this. Your ending to 3 would've been incredible and painful, but worth it. :)
It's a good ending though.
brilliant story I have just caught up, the cliffhanger at the end of chapter 3 was very cruel thank you Michelle
It's a good story; it ended up like an X-rated Hallmark movie. Now I have to read a few more MicheleNylons stories.
Glad you didn't finish your story with: "then the trans woman got killed" :'(
I love all your stories however this one was special and poignant. As another life long crossdresser I often critique how some women dress too so those parts ring so funny and true.
Another wonderful read, thank you Michele
You Minx!! I knew as soon as I saw a new chapter what you'd done! I could hug you! Kisses, GREAT work!
Brava to the most amazing Authoress on Lit. The ending brought the story's arc to a conclusion that was very, very satisfying. Brava.
I had been waiting to see what happened with the wife and the story just ends. It was pretty shitty how she started fucking around on him, then just ended their marriage. He got into being forced to save them in the first place. That conversation never happened in the story. Robert/Bobbie should be pissed his family ghosted him.
I absolutely loved this story. I kind of wish there was more, but I'm not even sure what I would want more of. And the ending was great. As a fan of noir if the last chapter had been the end I would have accepted it, but I'm glad we got a happy ending.