by Spector_Dugan
I'm really enjoying this. It's well-written, with humor, and has such a "not exactly innocent; but inexperienced" authenticity to it. Don't get me wrong, I come here for the porn, and I'm eagerly looking forward to a deflowering of which Krissy's mom and Jesus would most certainly not approve; but as long as the chapters are so quick and fun, and rolling out so promptly, I'm enjoying the edging.
Great series till now. I'm not sure, but it feels like this whole "leave the door open" thing is leading to the mom spying on them (and enjoying it). And dear innocent Krissy is maybe in on it. Just a random thought I had.
Another good chapter of both intense build up and a little payoff in small strides. People don’t appreciate slow burns like they should. Thank you!
Not rating any of these because I don't want to bring the numbers down, but for my own two cents worth, I *really* don't like these barely one page stories. I think it'd be wonderful if you actually had them *combined*, but having to go through 3 separate things is just irksome, and takes away from enjoying the writing. I've loved most of your work in the past, which makes this series all the more disappointing. I want to see more, but not like this.
Great Story, long may it last. I love slow burn stories. Krissy is slowly turning into a sexpot. And there is mom. Great stuff!