All Comments on 'Prissy Krissy Pt. 07'

Why do you always feel the need to tear couples apart? Why? (Sad face)

Okay, hold it right there!! You’ve already made it clear that these two won’t be together long term. No need to make it painful. Let them have their fun, but don’t break their hearts. Please?

I was really hoping that this wat not going to be one of those "Spencer"-type stories. But here we go.

I got lost in the transition to the state fair. You did not explain the phone call and how they got back together.

So, this is going the Group sex way?

who cares what this asshole does? He's a walking, talking, lying piece of shit. Why get emotionally involved as a reader?

Dear Emilymcplugger:

It’s called “CONFLICT”, without which stories have nowhere to go. Even in your Harlequin Romances there’s always conflict.

And, like life, stories should have no guarantee of a happy ending.

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Great work Spector, though I’d prefer longer chapters.

I agree with everything that Rapierwit24601 just said. This kind of break was needed to keep the story moving forward. 4/5

Rapier, as always, you're an idiot. Conflict doesn't need to mean that everything has an unhappy ending. The vast majority of Spector's works seem to go in that direction. Stories, especially on this site, do not have an obligation to be "like life" and unhappy. I would suggest that most people would prefer to be happy at the end of a story rather than tormented.

Excited to see where this goes! Lots of options with the friend now in the mix.

Mr. Spector is kind of a homewrecker. Most of his stories do not end well. I was hoping for a one time different approach, something lighter. But look what happened. Down the rabbit hole again.

I have to agree with a previous comment. So what happened between the phone call and the fair?? Feels like a key section got left out of the cut-n-paste?

Looking forward to the next part. This one felt like a tease.