All Comments on 'Private Classes With Prof. Russel'

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I didn't enjoy this story. The dialogue was not natural. There are too many errant and missing punctuation marks. The word literally used too often and used incorrectly almost every time. Then there are sentences like this: "I don't know why, but the idea of being alone with him in an empty apartment made me instantly feel wet between my legs." Of course she knows why that turns her on. She just told us how attractive her professor is and how every female student has a crush on him. All in all, this story is too sloppy.

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