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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

can joe get killed off with a violent death already? jesus he ruins this story. i have to scan through the text to see hes no longer in it so i can read the actual story.

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601about 8 years ago
To Hell with the Joe haters

Without another character the story was petering out. I THINK I know where you're going with Joe, and I can't wait to see if I'm right.

andyandsanne2016andyandsanne2016over 7 years ago
joe haters

No Joe is most definitely an excellent addition to this story , well done for bringing him in

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

ruining the series...

it's obvious that Kim prefers joe now... she just keeps screwing Charlie over for joe.

Charlie is the head of the house.. in fact it's his house and they go and have a special treat for joe on a Sat night.. then Kim goes off with joe again like last time...

Charlie isn't supposed to treat them differently but its okay for kim to treat joe and Charlie not equal.

Charlie is slowly getting screwed over by his sister..

gopherdudegopherdudeover 2 years ago

Fucking HATE the addition of Joe. Ruined a good story. Total fail!

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