All Comments on 'Private Pleasure'

by EmeliaBell

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Rawmaster50Rawmaster50almost 18 years ago
Strange...

little story of a strange little guy. You have captured his thoughts well enough, but he is still odd. The fact that a stranger knows about him is hinting of more and I think you might have to provide it.

daverddaverdover 17 years ago
Yup. Strange little guy.

Lives alone, respects children, interested in sex but not obsessed, sees art in everyday scenes, captures images to look at later rather than interacting with the people he watches. Maybe he's a little shy, but he doesn't seem to be afraid of people. There are probably more of us like that than one might imagine.

Maybe he's not so strange, after all.

Thanks for a good read.

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Emelia Bell is an author whose voice, both written and spoken, is uniquely English. She writes intense and steamy stories with strong characters and plots and mind-blowing sex scenes. If your taste runs to the Anglophiliac and you appreciate a plot-driven stroke story then E...