All Comments on 'Private Tent'

great story! I love sleep/sex stories and this one did not disappoint. tried my hand at writing one but it didn't get great response.

funny freudian skip there calling the campsite a website! LOL!

What a great read... I loved it. It's also a fantasy of mine so you hit the nail right on the head for me. I would love to read more of your writings. Please write another to this one! Chapter 2? Or more along this line with different characters. Thanks.

As you inferred, you are no literary genius, but wow.

This story took me from non-arousal to climax, all in the right way. The length of the intro was right, enough to set the story. Everything else just seemed to flow at the right speed.

You write very good content and I hope you continue to do so!

This was a great story! It wasn't boring at all, I was very intrigued by the fact that you don't have many stories. You should definitely continue this one, you're a splendid writer.

this is legit the hottest story I've ever read oml

I thought it would be the uncel but it wasnt!!!!!!......that made me so horny...

I'm just going to say I'm very appreciative of you writing this story.

So good! I loved it!

A little disturbed that it was grandpa, but nevertheless that was hot!

Grandpa decided to check out the new talent, instead of doing his grand-daughter again.

very nice, its always good when a old man abuses a younger woman

Was not expecting that ending/realization, but the descriptions were spot on and left me wanting more. It was over too soon.