by carlieplum
Why would he possibly want to stay with this dried up, manipulative, crazy bitch that's old enough to be his Mother? You've beaten this story to death and Travis continues to act in a manner no sane person would. With characters that are dumber than rocks you lead them down such an implausible path that, even for fiction, seemed ridiculous. This was complete drivel.
Nice to have you back, great story and writing as usual. Looking forward to the next two in the series already have me excited. Ignore crazy anon as usual.
As a longtime submissive I can tell you that I ADORE this story an hope you finish it.
I hope this is not the end. I'd like to see more, post marriage. Great job.
Just finished the last chapter and I have to say: Awesome! Absolutely wonderful story, loved every page of it!
I started reading chapter 1 - chapter 7. This is a perfect story. Hot from the start to the end. I normally don't comment on stories, only the fair few and this one was definitely worth commenting on.
And he did. He had learned in school and when he came back, he turned her into his submissive slut. Things were never the same around the farm.