by AlinaX
Thank you for the comment. What started as a daft lesbian bimbo concept has developed into an entertaining alternative reality show.
I have been waiting for Sarah to play the game. I have been enjoying this series a lot.
I started your series with chapter 7 as I saw it on the new listings. That one was excellent and made me want more. I’ve now read the entire series and this one, chapter 6, and chapter 7 are by far my favorites. Chapter 5 was pretty good. With that, I’d say u r coming up with better n better chapters, keep up the excellent series, I’m sure u can go far with this one.
It's an interesting project. It's a play, of course, on all those game show stories where the contestant is turned into a mindless bimbo, but I don't like the mindlessness of those. I want the penalties to be transformative in a way that are ultimately evolutionary rather than degrading. Anyway, I'm sure there will be more chapters, but keeping them interesting and original is no easy task.