All Comments on 'Prize or Penalty Ch. 06: Elf'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thankyou I enjoy this so much. One of if not my favourite series on here

AlinaXAlinaXover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the comment. What started as a daft lesbian bimbo concept has developed into an entertaining alternative reality show.

redheadslut32redheadslut32over 2 years ago

I have been waiting for Sarah to play the game. I have been enjoying this series a lot.

SNEZ_WritingSNEZ_Writingover 2 years ago

Another brilliant entry in this fantastic series!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Moar???

Pretty please

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 2 years agoAuthor

lol, one day, I'm sure...

Mukul10Mukul10over 1 year ago

Lovely story. ... Love to see another par

FortyninemikeFortyninemikeover 1 year ago

I started your series with chapter 7 as I saw it on the new listings. That one was excellent and made me want more. I’ve now read the entire series and this one, chapter 6, and chapter 7 are by far my favorites. Chapter 5 was pretty good. With that, I’d say u r coming up with better n better chapters, keep up the excellent series, I’m sure u can go far with this one.

AlinaXAlinaXover 1 year agoAuthor

It's an interesting project. It's a play, of course, on all those game show stories where the contestant is turned into a mindless bimbo, but I don't like the mindlessness of those. I want the penalties to be transformative in a way that are ultimately evolutionary rather than degrading. Anyway, I'm sure there will be more chapters, but keeping them interesting and original is no easy task.

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I like writing stories that are erotic without sacrificing plot and character. I like pushing consensual boundaries. I like novelty and I like perversity... Anyone wishing to do audio versions of my stories is welcome to do so - but please acknowledge the source and send me a...