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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Enjoyable short read see many directions for this story if oyu decide a part 2 longer version.

Pregnant etc.

skippersdadskippersdadover 2 years ago

Alian baby maker. but was it a machine??

ScottishTexanScottishTexanabout 2 years ago

She goes from being on a metal table to suddenly being outside on the grass. Um...yeah....just a tiny bit more explanation for that transition would have been nice. Like, did her surroundings suddenly change instantaneously? Or did she black out and the aliens kick her to the curb? Or was it all just an illusion? Too many possibilities to make it a good closing. But I still gave you a 5 nonetheless.

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